literature

Could I?

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Literature Text

Can you, can you
See through my disguise?
Will you, will you
See me in my eyes?

Can I, can I
Hide my true self?
Will I, will I
Put my heart up on the shelf?

This is a mask that you see,
I doubt you could take
the real me.

Would you, would you
Still want to be around me?
Could you, could you
Just stay
    by me?


Should I, should I
Speak up, speak out?
Could I, could I...
Ask you to just
    hold
      me?


[I'm sorry]
I dunno if it's actually a song...

This is directed more towards my "real life" friends than anything else... even if a lot of them won't read it, I won't let them... but, still.

Anywho,
Wrote it in German class the other day. Thought I'd submit it.

Whatever.
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Narutardgeek
I know I said I would send you a recording of me playing this as a song like a million years ago, but to tell you the truth I'm still not satisfied with it. I would really like some other instruments in it, unfortunately my keyboard is broken :(
I'm going to keep trying, I'll try to send it to you soon.